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He staggers down,
Down the empty side-street,
The shadow pavement of the side-street,
Jutting out at awkward angles,
And wait for you to trip,

Stumble,
Mumble,
And then the fall,

His head thumps and beats
With the rhythm of his footsteps,
Splashing in the puddles,
Black and unclear as hope,
That d
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             b
               bles
and S P L A T T E R S off to the sides,
And covers the sidewalks,

It feels like free fall
Over tops of skyscrapers,
Eyes glazed over,

The movement slows down

The moment slows down...

The pavement was so cold
And comforting,
The way it filled the void,

And numbed the pain.

The visions wavered and shivered,
Smelled like the musky bar
Where men shrug over, hunched,
Drowning their souls in the half light,

Circumnavigate your life,
And look from on the outside,
Into the window,

"It all looks so bleak from here,"

Stopped dead in your track,
Marked out with thumbtacks and strings,

(But shh, watch, it's coming)

Out of the corner of your eye,
Watch the poison slip out,
Slowly, slipping and slinking,
Like the SNAKE,
Curling around your middle,
Ready to strangle,

Screaming comes to realisation,
Breaks the window,
Shatter
Stumble
Mumble

And then the fall.
©2008-2009 =MoonlightFading
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Wrote this for Literature, inspired by T.S. Eliot.
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A fellow fan of T.S. Eliot?

A love me some Love Song of J. Alfred.

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Oh yes, definite fan. :]

We studied that in Literature, and I loved it. However depressing it is. It's just wonderful. :D

Thanks muchly for the favourite.

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katelouise.
It's me and the moon, she said.
Your class actually writes stuff for lit? Dammit!>_< All we do is listen to the teacher analyse a poem. This is blasphemy!

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Yeah, for this fortnight, at least. Miss Crawford has named it "Fortnight of Fun", which is pretty much a lame excuse for using our laptops and stuffing around doing nothing.
Me, Meg and Emmalee prefer to call it "Fornight of Fortified Evil", it has a much better ring to it.

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katelouise.
It's me and the moon, she said.
haha, fortified evil... I want to join your evil group... because I'm evil...

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You will have to pass the evil test!

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katelouise.
It's me and the moon, she said.
So, which Siberian village will I be destroying?

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Hm, that is your choice. That is how we rank your evil-ness.

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katelouise.
It's me and the moon, she said.
Make it Vladivostok then, I'll go after the big fish. The Trans-Siberian express's last stop will soon be Burningheapograd.

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